The September House by Carissa Orlando: book review

Eerie narrow hallway with dim lighting and an unsettling atmosphere.

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The September House by Carissa Orlando is the kind of haunted house novel that sneaks up on you. Published in 2023 by Berkley Horror, it follows Margaret, a woman who has moved into a beautiful Victorian home with her husband Hal and quietly discovered that the house is, in fact, extremely haunted. Bodies bleed through the walls every September. Ghosts wander the halls. Margaret knows. And she has decided, with the calm pragmatism of someone who has endured far worse, that she is simply not leaving. This is her home now, and she intends to keep it.

What the novel is about

Orlando sets up the premise fast. Margaret and Hal bought the house as a fresh start, and for a while it worked. Then September arrived, and the house began doing what it does every year: bleeding, moaning, producing spectral visitors who don't always stay polite. Hal has since fled. Margaret has stayed, developed a system of rules for managing the haunting, and is getting on with her life. Then her daughter Katherine shows up to check on her, and the annual horror kicks into a higher gear than Margaret has ever seen before.

The novel is told entirely from Margaret's perspective, in a first-person voice that is dry, meticulous, and quietly devastated. She documents the ghosts the way a homeowner might document a slow pipe leak: as a problem to be managed. That voice is the book's greatest asset. It's funny without undermining the horror. Margaret's narration sits right on the line between dark comedy and genuine dread, and Orlando walks it with real confidence for a debut.

The haunting as metaphor

Orlando is doing something specific here. The haunted house is real, the ghosts bleed actual blood, but the novel is also a story about a woman who has spent years minimising domestic danger. Margaret's relationship with Hal is not a healthy one. Her insistence on staying in a terrifying house, her compulsive rule-keeping, her refusal to admit that something is badly wrong: these read as recognisable behaviours, not supernatural quirks. The horror serves as a container for something more grounded and more painful.

This is a thread running through some of the best recent haunted house fiction. The Grip of It by Jac Jemc pursues a similar move, using a house's physical deterioration to externalise a marriage coming apart. Orlando's approach is warmer and more comedic, but the structural logic is the same: the building mirrors what can't be said out loud.

The ghosts themselves

One of the novel's pleasures is its cast of named, recurring spirits. Margaret has catalogued them, assigned them personalities, and developed strategies for each. Eabha, the silent weeping woman. Father Mathias, the hostile priest. The children who appear in clusters and are best left alone. Orlando gives each ghost enough specificity that they become characters rather than set dressing. Some are menacing. One or two are almost sympathetic. The best of them manage to be both at once.

The September haunting, when it escalates, is genuinely scary. Orlando doesn't rely on cheap shock; the dread comes from Margaret's measured tone cracking, slowly, as events begin to exceed her management strategies. A few scenes in the novel's second half land with real force. One involving the basement needs no exaggeration to do its job.

Where it stumbles

The novel isn't flawless. The pacing in the middle third slackens when Katherine's arrival turns the book into something closer to a domestic drama. Katherine is written to be frustrating by design, but the reader's patience for her disbelief does wear thin before Orlando reverses it. The Hal storyline, handled largely in flashback and implication, is the emotional core of the book but sometimes feels underdeveloped given how much the plot depends on understanding their dynamic.

Readers who come to the book expecting wall-to-wall scares may also find the comic register disorienting at first. This is a horror novel, but it's also, deliberately, quite funny. That tonal range is a strength, not a flaw, though it's worth knowing going in.

How it compares to other recent haunted house fiction

The haunted house subgenre has produced strong work over the past decade. We Used to Live Here by Marcus Kliewer approaches the same territory from a much quieter, more unsettling angle. Orlando's book is livelier, more explicit about its metaphors, and more willing to let its protagonist have genuine wit. The comparison that comes up most often is Berkley Horror's own catalogue of character-driven horror fiction: novels where the monster is real but never the whole story.

It also shares DNA with The Southern Book Club's Guide to Slaying Vampires by Grady Hendrix, another horror novel that places a woman at the centre of a supernatural threat and uses genre conventions to examine the ways women are trained to minimise danger and perform normalcy. Both books work because the horror is never disconnected from the domestic reality beneath it.

Verdict

The September House by Carissa Orlando is a confident, distinctive debut. Its narrator is one of the most memorable voices in recent horror fiction: wry, exhausted, quietly heartbreaking, and absolutely refusing to leave her house. The metaphorical layer earns its weight. The comedy and the dread sit together without cancelling each other out. For a first novel, that's a significant achievement. Orlando has written something that sticks around after the last page, which is, when you think about it, exactly what a good ghost story should do.